You'll Find Out Soon Enough Why .. It Can be Rude to Stare!

Just drink me in .. all of me!

I have a few captions that I could have posted, but one is more in tune for wedding season, and the other isn't quite done, and I might want to overhaul it. So I went to the D'arkives and found this image that was definitely hypnotic in nature, so I went with that.

Sometimes you need to write up a huge plot, with twists and turns, double crosses and counter plans .. and other times you just go straight ahead, and not fuck with a great source photo and massage it into place.

Hell, there's an argument to be made, from me as well, that the last paragraph isn't needed. I debated leaving it in, or taking it out entirely, and there's an argument for both sides.

Ultimately, I left it in because I thought it tied the caption together better, where Dee (yes, this is definitely an iteration of me) initially starts by acknowledging the lack of social graces in YOU staring at me .. going through all the reasons why you CAN'T stop staring at everything but my eyes .. and then gives implicit permission to stare at me. All so that I can drain your masculinity and make you my thrall.

That last paragraph is the summation of what was said, and a jumping point to the next part, which is implied, that Dee will be telling you all the things that she'll be staring at as you change, starting with your hair, and working her way down your body, just like you did to her. Repetition, structure and direct and clear paths are used in hypnotic techniques and I tried to use that here in the caption too.

And is this a magical caption, or more of just a hypnosis caption? Your guess is as good as mine. The fact it could be either makes it a bit more fun for me. I've putting tags for both in the algorithm, but it could just be suggestions that take root, or Dee is one of those magical big tiddy goth girls you hear so much about!

Sooooo, what says you? Is it better the way I went with, implying things to move forward, or would it have been more impactful if I kept it succinct and ended it slightly earlier?

And for those who can't find me on Deviant Art .. here you go! I am now past 300 watchers, so I made it easier on myself by creating a file I can upload. It's Dee casting a spell on you from the comfort of her own command center!  

Yes, it's Deep Blue Something .. which is a pretty vague name for a band.