Each second has a moment of sheer (fill in the blank) so yeah, shitty title, but good caption! I swear!
Made this for Vypress, who likes captions that are descriptive in its changes. I don't often do these because to me, it often feels like you are just restating the obvious if you look at the picture that accompanies the text. I will usually incorporate some sort of physical and emotional feeling to booster it above providing a list of physical attributes and clothing that has been changed. Enhanced knowledge, or swapped knowledge is something else that can be added without hurting the overall story, especially when it's a completely magical plot-line.
That sort of thing is always welcome on my part, because it can fill so many preferences. For instance, in an age regression TG story, swapping intellects, or pieces of learning, seems like a great way to make the protagonist embarrassed or feel different from their usual selves. How would he know what sort of hairstyle the girl next in line is wearing, or what a "bolero" jacket is. Swapping skills like driving a stick shift, or any sort of car, with how to dye and curl hair .. or even a one to one shift of losing driving coordination, but gaining all the bus routes and time stops for the city. "Jim looks down at his Driver's License in his leather wallet as it suddenly becomes a Learner's Permit, laminated in a slew of plastic slots containing a bus pass and high school student ID .. all of which reveals the name .. Jamie!"
What sort of things do you like the most when you see TG captions that offer swaps of some sort of trait, either physical, mental, sexual, or emotional? How about one or more for each? If they sound interesting or trigger an idea .. perhaps they'll end up in an upcoming caption!
Almost the end of the year, and this is probably my favorite album of the year, Ghost - Prequelle. Nothing too brutal musically, beautiful in many spots, and evil in such an alluring way. Every albums they've done has gotten better; they've often sounded somewhat like Blue Oyster Cult, but they have pushed far beyond that by now, though this will probably become their "Don't Fear the Reaper". I will probably highlight a few more songs over the next week, and through the beginning of December, showcase some other things I've been listening to over the last year.
I always love the sensory aspect of the transformation, which I think you captured very well here with the dragging of fingernails through hair, the pop of the nipples, and the sucking of the package. That level of detail drives it home, far more than an instantaneous swap.
ReplyDeleteThe other thing I love to see in a caption is the mental aspect. On the one hand, I love it when a subject is aware of being bimbofied, panicking over the fading of their intelligence while fighting the explosion of newly pornographic desires. On the other hand, I think it can be even more powerful when there's a sensation of being trapped, of still being this terrified, straight, confused man trapped inside an uber-feminine body that craves the attention of men . . . of being aware of the desires, of feeling the pleasure . . . but lacking any control.
On a musical note, you are the second person to recommend Ghost this week. I just hit them up on Spotify and I can totally hear the BOC comparison.
Lack of control linked with new compulsions are wonder twins of TG captions in my opinion, especially when it someone is being bimbofied and they are self-aware of how they sound and what they are saying.
ReplyDeleteGlad you were recommended Ghost this week .. shows you have friends with good taste!
I love it....you're so evil!!!! I really didn't see it coming but i loved it!!! One wonders what the bargain was for the transformation to occur....did he seek it out or was it thrust upon him...
ReplyDeleteJust wonderful....I love surprises and this one really surprised me!!!!
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It was just something that I added at the end. Just felt right to finish it that way, as it was one of the few body parts I really hadn't mentioned. Plus, she does look like she's about to take a big bite from your neck!
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