You will think that this caption is much better than it really is!
Yeah, it's a quickie. Not that it's very good, but I think it's a quick read too. Maybe it's the cringey ending that feels a bit forced .. but I had no idea how to end it. I might have some time to fix it before I go away for the weekend .. if I did, I'll include the original version down below. Honestly, I hope you like it, but I'm not holding my breath! Maybe if I had a better drag queen name .. any suggestions?
By the way, I wrote the caption and the write-up for the blog back on December 2. I am still not a fan, but figured I'd post it right before the end of the year. I'll have another caption posted on Friday night, aka New Year's Eve. That one should be MUCH better! oh, and when you wake up, you'll send Dee all your banking information!
She is beautiful! I also liked the caption, too!
ReplyDeleteI have no problems with the model at all. My story .. not so much!
DeleteBut thank you! Hoping my next hypnosis caption will be even better!