Sunday, June 21, 2015

Three Virgin Guys .. and a Magic Rock!


I think that Damien kid could be a great lawyer if he wanted to be!


Made this one for Milky, another newbie to the Haven. I had this picture saved, as I knew it had all the elements of a photo that could drive a good TG story. The girls look good, and the guy looks generic enough (I had thought about cropping out his head, but honestly, he's pretty damn generic!) that he doesn't get in the way at all .. and we don't have close up gynecological exams going on either.  It's a straight up R rated caption, mostly because of some tits and the girl is obviously still riding his dick post coitus.

The "hard" part was in coming up with a way to have the 2 women transformed while there is still a guy there, and have it be a trapped TG element, but with a more coerced feeling to it, since the picture does seem playful.I had originally thought about having it be a guy bugging his girlfriend to have a 3 some with his best friend, and she agrees .. but has them all swap gender so she gets to have all the penetrative fun. Perhaps the best friend likes being a female so much that he doesn't want to swap back. I was pretty sure that has happened at least a few times over the years in TG captioning and/or TG fiction, and I didn't have a twist or parody to make it the slightest bit original.

Once I had the plot, I realized that I need all three people to talk, hence the 3 different color text to differentiate. I remember Cory/Cori aka Wannabestuck loves setups like this, so I wrote her into it. I wanted it that way, mostly so I can name check everyone, but also because I really didn't want an evil villain monologue. Don't get me wrong, Damien is a complete dick here, but a wall of text with the exposition is not what you want to read, and truthfully, they were all friends just looking to have gotten laid at least once before hitting college, going into the army, graduating high school .. whatever 80's teen movie convention you'd like to use. To me, Damien was doing more of a, "better YOU than ME! Sucks, don't it buddy?" and that he definitely didn't want to be a female, even for a small amount of time, and definitely not having sex with a guy while being one. Don't tell me that everyone out there didn't have a friend exactly like this, that would take advantage of any technicality. If you don't, then you probably were that friend!

Anyway, that is pretty much the story of this caption. I like it because it has a naughtiness factor, a trapped / stuck factor, the trickster factor, and a bit of alpha male in it as well. Reviews on the Haven have been favorable, and I hope everyone here enjoys it too! Let me know if you like it!

There are 8+ days left to do something with the DIY Challenge, so click on the link for "Latest DIY" below the banner and check it out. Also, you can do something to celebrate my birthday towards the end of the month by reading THIS POST from a week ago. Hope everyone enjoyed Father's Day. Other than the restaurant fucking up my veggie burger THREE times, I had a great weekend!


Of course everyone that reads this blog feels the same way as this song now . "I WANNA ROCK!"


Or "Everybody wants a rock to wind a piece of string around!"
"Everybody wants prosthetic foreheads on their real heads!"

4 comments:

  1. Fun cap Dee.

    I'm thinking back through life, college, life before, first college, high school, and even into middle school and I don't think I had a friend quite like that. In fact I'm sure of it.... ohiseewhatyoudidthere!

    C

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    1. I just KNEW it! All those captions you created were just cover-ups to things you would have done to all of us if you had the chance! LOL

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  2. OK i well say it "did he get his rocks off ?"
    Is that guys poodle perm the best ever. ?

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    1. Twisted Sister's drummer died a few months back, so they are doing a farewell 40th's anniversary tour. If they come nearby I hope to see it.They were an early hard rock band I remember when I was young.

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