Another caption fresh off the press .. you really want to read this one, don't you? Of course you do!
I found this picture while zooming around the Internet and I just HAD to make something out of it. Both Rachel from Rachel's Haven fame, and her boyfriend Miriam have been dealing with much of her issues with the various cancer and other medical problems, so why not make a caption where they can both have some fun?!?
And I was hoping to confuse a few people, at least in the top half of the caption, and after I set up the formatting, I realized I had hood-winked myself while doing so. Luckily, there was nothing in the picture that would look weird in flipping it, so I did so; which was so much easier than redoing all the text into italics and right vs left justification. Just know that the left text refers to the person on the left in the caption. Easy Peasy right?
Not entirely. I only had so much space to work with, and I wanted the image to dominate the screen, and the caption itself, figuring that whatever was happening, it was centered right there in their center areas, and that needed to be the focus. I wrote out what I originally wanted to say, and then reworked it, reworded it, cut out 3 words and replaced them with 1 different word, etc .. Originally it was just supposed to be an erotic quickie, but became something more as I tightened it up. I wish I had space for one or two more lines to complete the story, but ending it here certainly does leave it hanging in just the right moment, don't you think? The anticipation is appealing, isn't it?
So, I thought this would make a great Sunday night / Monday morning caption read for everyone out there .. mostly because it isn't something I'd usually whip up. I mean, it's ONLY models shot from the knee to the start of the rib cage .. and it includes a bit of a closeup for genitals. Then again, if THAT is what you are looking for, this is about as close as I'll get in using a photo. I don't think I have an actual label for this when I'm going to post it.
I would like to get some comments on this caption, as I mentioned it isn't quite my usual fare. Was it something you'd like to see more of, or is once enough? I tend to go with darker story-lines while keeping the pictures R rated at most. Should I try to use more explicit photos going forward, or are you happy with the balance I am providing at this moment. There are no wrong comments to be made, and I figured I'd get people's opinions on the subject matter. What did you think of the plot for this caption itself? How long did it take to figure out just what exactly had happened? Do you actually KNOW what happened? LOL After a few comments, I'll reveal what happened in my mind in regards to how they ended up in that situation.
Such a great song, and one that fits in well with the entire blog, don't you think?
I love it - nothing at all wrong with getting a little explicit from time to time.
ReplyDeleteMy head is still such in the questions behind it . . . who put them there, why are they dressed that way, what were their captors expecting to happen? Then again, maybe nobody is behind it, and maybe the hubby arranged all this as an elaborate means of coming out as a crossdresser, concocting a situation where his wife will be excited and receptive to the change. ;)
OK. Now I am a bit worried that I didn't get the point across that I wanted to, especially if you didn't figure it out. Usually you are clued in fairly well.
DeleteThis is a genital swap caption. They are dressed alike, and he has a pussy, which is why he mentioned the way he was feeling. She now has a cock, which is why it is poking at her belly button.
He has the white dialog, and she has the yellow for those who didn't follow.