It was a dark and stormy night. Or was it? I cannot recall it honestly.

Anyway, a voice said to me, "Dee? Sweetie Pie? Shouldn't you enslave the men of this world into the divine pleasures of femininity?"

That was awhile ago, and sure enough, it began to happen .. on Rachel's Haven. Then I started up this crappy blog in 2010. Enjoy!

Wednesday, July 23, 2014

It's the Little Things That Count!

Because in the end, it IS the little things that matter the most.

Made this one a few days ago for Jezebel. I cannot stress how much I like this chick! She has so much energy and took the Haven by storm and gave it some much needed pizazz. She reminds me of the smattering of many of my former besties from the Haven that have moved on and if I am the slightest bit jaded about something, I can just look at her work and a smile will slowly crawl across my face like I'm some TG Grinch that makes my heart 3 sizes bigger again!

The picture just screamed Jinny, and I knew I had to use it. The look is somewhat Emo so I figured, why not embrace that? Right away I wanted to focus on the earrings and the shirt, so to tie everything together like Lebowski's rug, I created a background that hopefully drove it home before you even realized it was relevant to the overall caption.

Puberty / growing up in your teen years is hard enough to go through, as its a battle to define exactly what you are and what your place is in the world. Now, throw in a gender change, whether accidentally or by choice, and now you are navigating choppy waters. Just when you think you've got it down, you are competing against a new body, hormones, societal norms, and self-image.

I tried to convey that as simply as I could in a caption that was emphasizing just a mundane (for most people) event we've gone through so many times, finding new clothes, albeit for first day of school, new job, etc ... Its why I love to make my stories a "moment in time" snapshot, because I think the themes are universal and ground the necessary "suspension of disbelief" the reader has to make to accept what is going on.

For this caption, its just about being comfortable in your own skin and how a person close to you can always seem to sense what's wrong and figure out a way to make it right. Jinny's mom takes something he loved from his past and re-purposes it into an acceptable new item more fitting to what she's become. Then its celebrating the closeness between them as they discover the path for Jinny that's awaiting her .. that she doesn't have to be a completely new person just because the body has changed.

No nudity or big titties, no embarrassment, no compulsions built upon layers of hypnosis, no wonderfully crafted bits of witty dialog, etc ... but its still one of my favorite captions I've made of the last few months. Its genuinely sweet and uplifting in a way that I often am not. My personal nectar is often laced with vinegar, but its always laden with the best intentions. Just stick with me and you'll get all the flavors when you least expect them so you'll never be thirsty!

DISCUSSION QUESTION: Did the caption live up to what I tried to do within it? What did you like about it and what fell short? Did it strike a chord inside you or where you more just sort of "meh" about it all?


  1. A nice little caption. maybe without your post amble I would not have read so much into it but did get the acceptance part of the change and liked the old shirt part after such a big change I think it would be nice to have something to hold on to. like many of your captions a lot of story can be imagined from few words.

    1. Glad that what I wrote fleshed things out for you more. Its one of the major reasons I made the blog in the first place, for those who wanted more information about why decisions in a caption were made and the thinking that went into it.

  2. I agree with your analysis, and I can see why it's a favourite. Sometimes that's all that's needed, a little reminder than acceptance can happen (even if, in this case, it's strictly fantasy).

    It is lovely. I like the picture but with the text it works *much* better and becomes sweet. In essence, this works more than just on a visual level.

  3. Wonderful little cap. It gave me a heartwarming feeling, and a much needed smile.

    Our Caption Countess sure is a busy bee, and it nice to see someone blossom the way she is.
    There is definitely a difference between the Jinny I saw in the beginning and now. She seemed shy and modest yet enthusiastic back then. Now? She still is modest and enthusiastic, but most of her shyness is gone. I hope she keeps it up, after all we need people like you and Jinny to keep the Haven running, so people like me have a place to go to.

    1. Yeah, I can see the evolution too. So glad that you continue to come to the Haven to find new things.