Make sure you have an endgame the next time you try to control someone's mind!
Only have a few minutes here so I will make this quick. Did this caption the other day. Wasn't that impressed with it, but it's something I'd probably give a grade of C- or so. I think the idea was much better than the execution to be honest. Then again, perhaps the main character is too vile to really carry the story in any way. Yes, things don't work out for him .. but still, he's pretty much a predator out to force himself onto others that he helped to create.
I'll have something posted towards the weekend. Finally seems like Spring is kinda here, though we seem to have skipped it and went from highs in the 40's to high's in the mid to upper 80's!
I don't know, I like the humor of it. Plus, the fact that the boys find their own pleasure in the situation, frustrating their kidnapper in the process, is a nice touch. Don't be so hard on yourself. B+ for sure.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sally. I might have been hard on myself .. hee hee I said hard on! .. but looking at it again, I definitely don't see it more than a B- at best. not quite as bad as I thought at first glance.
DeleteHi Dee, I agree with Sally, you are too hard on yourself. The twist at the end makes this an hilarious caption.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed the ending. I had that first and I think that is what i didn't like .. that the rest of the caption wasn't up to par with the ending.
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