.. or does the party crash them?
Made this caption for Pantyhosegurl, with an assist to Elise, as she was comment #3475, which was the next comment reward # so I figured she'd fit in well with this idea I had. I know its a standard picture, and perhaps others have even used it before, but when I saw it, I noticed the lack of touching in the groin area .. almost like a, "leave room for the Holy Ghost" type of dance pose.
I wondered why they would hug like that, other than the obvious thought that they were touching each other's asses. Women are usually good huggers, giving a good effort, especially to those they know really well. the plot came out of that question, and how I would answer it. From there it took off a bit, and perhaps went bounding way beyond where I started. I could have written a few more paragraphs easily, but started running out of space towards the end, so I had to consolidate a few ideas into one. Am I completely happy with this one? Nah. I love the middle section the most, though perhaps I'm giving the whole caption short shrift, since its already gotten 3 comments on the Haven.
DISCUSSION QUESTION: How would YOU rewrite this caption? Lets say the caption ended without the last 2 paragraphs. How would YOU finish it up? If it sounds good, perhaps I'll post the results here in the post itself. I have no problem with remixing this with another collaborator. Or just leave a comment on whether you like it as it is already.