Is it really what you wanted .. or is it what I wanted for you? I guess it doesn't really matter now, does it?
I liked the image, and her off into the distance stare made me think of a mesmerized / hypnosis type of caption, and it just took off from there. And I like the fact that honestly, I have no idea if the mistress has implanted all these desires into our protagonist, or if it's truly how he felt, and made it known to the hypno-domme.
What do you think, sweeties? Which side do you fall on, or do you have an alternate idea on what is happening in this caption? I'd love to hear from you all, no matter which point of view you take on it. I don't think there's really a wrong answer. And if there's other things you'd like Ms. Mentia the Mesmerist to compel you to do, also let me know that in the comments. Perhaps there could be another caption coming down the pike for some good responses?
I wasn't planning on posting tonight, as I mentioned before I was doing some 5 year anniversary of my forever person's passing, but I got home around 6 PM and thought, "let's see if I can whip something up to post" and you are looking at the result. Fresh off the vine so to speak. From farm to table, directly to you, with no middle men (or women) and tasty captions too!
She does have that "I'm Hypnotized' look, but she could also have a "I am so bored with all the questions", let me get on to being and doing the girly stuff that you said I would be able to do.
ReplyDeleteVery true. And I must say her eyebrow game is FIERCE!
DeleteI also do like the image. Before reading it, guessed there was some hypnosis involved. She definitely wanted those things being asked and now can't wait on the fun but took Mizztress to cleverly bring her out.
ReplyDeleteYeah, there is something compelling about the image itself, so it definitely did the heavy lifting for the story, be that as it may.
DeleteThe only thing I see is the old trope, you are more creative than that.
ReplyDelete"And you were cheating on me with your secretary, weren't you?"
"Yes, Mistress"
"But I found your secretary's necklace in the car, didn't I?"
"Yes, Mistress"
"and soon you were listening to my special tapes for an hour a night, and took those special smoothies, and quitting your job."
"Yes, Mistress"
"And taking better care of your skin, and hair, and the house in a nice French maid outfit?"
"Yes, Mistress"
"and you had surgery to look JUST LIKE that tramp you cheated on me with, as that was the look you liked? Her face and figure? "
"Yes, Mistress"
"And now you want to go back to work, so you can buy new short skirts and tall heels?"
"Yes, Mistress"
"Well, I suppose I can allow that. That is a nice necklace. I had it welded shut on you, so you won't lose it like she did. And something else welded on too. So it won't go into any other secretaries"
"Yes, Mistress"
After almost 2,500 posts, they don't all hit the spot, and sometimes you have to give the people what they want. So far this has gotten four comments, and then other times I think I've created a masterpiece and it gets maybe one comment and half the views. It's really weird how sometimes things connect in ways you don't think about when you're creating it.
DeleteI do like your scenario :)
you must consider your audience. Wide and varied, so responses will be wide and varied too.
DeleteExcellent caption! Love the subject and the text. You did a good job threading the needle of viewing it through a hypnosis trope lens or maybe even a wholesome one of just a friendly Mistress helping our protagonist with some positive affirmations.
ReplyDeleteI hadn't thought of it as a set of affirmations. It brings a bit of Stuart Smalley to the caption I think. Doggone it, people think I'm sexy and feminine!
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