tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1870069212223825401.post1871665293407927696..comments2024-03-28T03:27:26.345-04:00Comments on Dee-lusions of Grandeur: Putting On A New FaceDee Mentiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07798903090538917010noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1870069212223825401.post-73408489931532716602011-09-11T11:37:39.843-04:002011-09-11T11:37:39.843-04:00For me, I saw 'Jeremy' as being forced int...For me, I saw 'Jeremy' as being forced into the situation by Damien-san. So I guess I did fill in the details with my own preferences. I think some of that came in from 'Doubt began to form in Mei's mind....' and with 'With that thought, she drifted off once again to....' <br /><br />Upon reading your thought process, I can see that as the clearer way to read this. Mine is a little more convoluted. I think you conveyed what you wanted, while leaving it open enough for interpretation. I'm sure Mei loved it, as there is enough room for it to match up to her preferences. I certainly don't think it was watered down 'too much'. The only times I ever think that of any cap is when I read it, and don't have enough information to get any story out of it. I never get that from your caps. I may not end up with the same mental picture you were thinking of... but I get enough of a story line to work with.Caitlyn Maskedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02732033913089350905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1870069212223825401.post-83402959411608805582011-09-05T01:25:43.595-04:002011-09-05T01:25:43.595-04:00I think this is one of the stories where things ar...I think this is one of the stories where things are better left understated. Reading this, I have questions as to what happens, but because it feels like a exert from a short story, I feel like the details will eventually be revealed. <br /><br />I'm finding more and more I don't want caption detailed rammed down my throat. Yes, I like vivid writing, but vivid doesn't equal insane amounts of detail. It's timely detail spread out in chunks. This caption is perfect in that reguard; there's story and there is a hint of a background and there's enough to draw you in to want to know more as to how Mei came to be this way.Mistress Simonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03830472323307586514noreply@blogger.com